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Lunarbeans's avatar

This is actually amazing. I was so nervous? Excited? when the build up to the “big boy” was happening, I felt so bad for Jumbo yet I really wouldn’t want to meet him. The character is so good, the writing is good, and the sensory details drew me in so well. I know Substack is the writing app but you should write a collection of short stories if you haven’t already!

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EcoLoco's avatar

What a great character, I love that he bows at the end. So good

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